Suspense Story 5 Paragraph

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Suspense Paper

James Role is a bank manager in Little Rock, AL. It's the only bank in the small town and everyone knows everyone. The bank hasn't been robbed since the 1800's. James works every day from open to close. He is the first one there and the last one to leave each day.

It was Friday the 13th and James had just driven into the bank parking lot. He got out of his car and was on his way to the front door of the bank when he thought he saw a shadow inside. He opened the door and went in. He thought he had seen the person behind his desk. So he slowly walked up and looked cautiously behind his desk. He realized it was only his coat he had left from the day before. He told himself then he didn't not believe in Friday the 13th and he was going to have a good day.

It was about 10:00am and the bank had just opened. All the sudden this man walked in who was dressed really nice and James had never seen him before. He was to busy talking to his next door neighbor to think anything of the man. All the sudden the man pulls out a MP5 from his suit jacket and demands everyone to get down. One of the tellers started to reach for a panic button but was slammed by the butt of the mans MP5.

The man demanded for James to open the safe and not to try anything stupid. James opened the safe for the man but James had a trick up his sleeve. As the man walked into the safe James reached to his belt and pulled out a hand gun and shot the man in the hand. The...